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I love your post about you it is cool that you have used lots of couler to creat your post pop it really got my atention. I am a year 5 but it is cool that you are year 4. Maybe next time you could add something after the woud favourite like your fav animal. Over all great post How long did it take you to make?
Hi Olivia I like your post beucase it is about you! Why did you do this? Maybe Next time you could add some more infoamtion about you and you started to write somthing but then you stopped. What is your Favorite thing to do? I have done a About Me post before , it is on my blog. From Zoe
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hi my name is Amelia
ReplyDeletei love the colour you used!
Hi Olivia
ReplyDeleteI love your post about you it is cool that you have used lots of couler to creat your post pop it really got my atention. I am a year 5 but it is cool that you are year 4. Maybe next time you could add something after the woud favourite like your fav animal. Over all great post How long did it take you to make?
From Angel-Mey at yaldhurst modle school
Hi Olivia
ReplyDeleteI like your post beucase it is about you! Why did you do this? Maybe Next time you could add some more infoamtion about you and you started to write somthing but then you stopped. What is your Favorite thing to do? I have done a About Me post before , it is on my blog. From Zoe