Wednesday, 17 June 2020
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Hi my name is Amelia p I go to St Marys school. I like how you have a beginning middle and end. Where is the shark ride? I like how you said the water is rough.
ReplyDeleteKia ora I am Thomas from st mary's school. I really like how you used the word ruff waters. Your work reminds me of when I did my shark work. Have you tried writing more words in the last to sentences?
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